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Thursday, May 12, 2022

Wednesday, May 11, 2022

COLD TASK

 In class, we do a Cold Task to find out what we already know. Our cold task was on narrative writing. This is a snapshot of what I can do in 30 mins by myself.

We are learning to self-access our witting so we know what we are good at and what we need to work on.   

What I what to improve on is figurative language and use show not tell more often.


COLD TASK TERM 2 2022 NARRATIVE 


Write a narrative, this could be a story your make up or a whanau story you retell. 


Name: Lucas


When I and my family went to Auckland we went to snow planet,

rainbow’s end and lots of shopping malls.


When we got to Snowplanet me and my sister I went in and got our stuff on like a helmet and boots on. Then we went in and then we got to the top we slid down very fast down the hill on a donut and then we did it over and over again. After 2hours we were finished, the next day we went to rainbow’s end my dad dropped us off at the entry and then drove around for like 10 min. When he got back we enter the shop so we could go in.


Thursday, May 5, 2022

Power Of Forgiveness, How Can We Stop Revenge

In class our topic is forgiveness. We are learning why it is important. We read about Ngakuku and how forgiveness stopped the ongoing war. Here is my reading response.